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Dying To Hold You - Lyrics by ~BlazingMalice:iconBlazingMalice:





Dying To Hold You – Piano background.

They spent their time together,
Braving the stormy weather.
They laughed rain or shine.

Now she’s looking for the memories,
Covering all of her pains.
She wont find him outside again.

They didn’t tell her he’d gone,
She found out on her own.
Now she’s dreaming her dreams of him.

She’s screaming alone,
She won’t hold on for long.
Her heart’s crying its last set of tears.

{And I’m dying inside,
I’m just sick of these lies.
I just want to hold you, hold you,
Hold you to me.}

He is watching her still,
Watching her shattering will.
He knows she wants to join him.

He is watching her die,
He never said his goodbyes.
He needs to see her one last time.

His eyes roam over her tear stained face,
She can’t believe how he makes her heart race.
He’s with her once again.

He smiles once again,
She thinks this isn’t real.
She dismisses and ignores what she sees.

{And I’m dying inside,
I’m just sick of these lies.
I just want to hold you, hold you,
Hold you to me.}

His eyes fill with tears,
She has changed over the year.
She hadn’t believed it was him.

Now she weeps one her own,
Once again all alone.
She had missed her last chance.


Hold me close,
Don’t ever let me go.
I’m so scared that I’ll fall…
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Author's Comments

Ok, this is one of the first songs I have written. I thought of the theme of a friends death and elaborated on it.

The picture is from darling :iconrockgem:'s gallery! [link] <--- Have a look! And fave if you like it!

This is a collab between us two because we shared ideas. *whispers* She is great, really! [link] Have a look at her gallery PLEASE!

Her part of the collab is a beutiful poem! Have a look! [link] And definitely fave if you like it! And comment!

I am open for art trades and commisions~!

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But look at the moral of the song. If you love someone, tell them. Life is too short to leave things like that unsaid. :heart:

(C) To me! And :iconrockgem:'s poem is (C) to her! No copying please... It hurties mah feelings... *sniff*

Hope you like it!!

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:icongothicsharona:
meh love it =D

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Some people just have everything and pass the point of no return.
Yet they do not realize that they have what they want the most.
And bother us about what they'll never have and never get.
:iconrockgem:
love it - so sad and so beautiful i eraly liek hwo thsi came together from reading your original work in progress on messanger - either way a beautiful job! keep up the good work!! :blowkiss:

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some people are like slinkies not really good for anything but it will always bring a smile to your face when you push them down stairs...

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A Mad Scientist of art...
:iconblazingmalice:
Goooood! Thankies, I rather like this one! xxxx

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"Always tell people when you love them. Don't hold something that important back. Life is too short."

[link] <---- A song to prove it.
:iconfiredragonmatty:
Really Nice.
The emotional themes are clearly visible aswell.
:iconblazingmalice:
Thank you honey... My first attempt at lyrics... *blush*

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"Always tell people when you love them. Don't hold something that important back. Life is too short."

[link] <---- A song to prove it.
:icongothicsharona:
of course, i helped with the last three lines *smirks* ... hehe... *hugtackle*

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Some people just have everything and pass the point of no return.
Yet they do not realize that they have what they want the most.
And bother us about what they'll never have and never get.
:iconthe-oncoming-storm:
Nice - very cool. Meh likey.

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Everybody has a purpose... it's just finding it.
Mod of ~Go-Go-Gadget-fans
:iconrockgem:
it was a very good atempt :clap:

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some people are like slinkies not really good for anything but it will always bring a smile to your face when you push them down stairs...

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A Mad Scientist of art...
:iconblazingmalice:
Thank you.... And yeah D=

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"Always tell people when you love them. Don't hold something that important back. Life is too short."

[link] <---- A song to prove it.

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